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Digital Paint Community => Other Stuff => Topic started by: capo on December 30, 2013, 02:25:15 AM
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http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/165080
Holla atcha boi for dem beetz.
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I puked so hard I never want to click on anything.
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I puked so hard I never want to click on anything.
+1
JAY KAY MAN ITS MY #1 MOST PLAYED ON MY IPAWD
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Nice tune
Well written
Lead synth sounds ugly the way it fades in
Not enough heavy guitar
Not enough grand piano
Percussion is a little strange but 'tis all right I guess
I like minor songs better than major in general (this is minor)
Where's the guitar, piano, saxophone etc. solo? A good song needs at least one solo.
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A good song needs at least one solo.
No it does not, there are no certain rules to follow, just some things that work well, this isn't nesescarily one.
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No it does not, there are no certain rules to follow, just some things that work well, this isn't nesescarily one.
So you've never listened to jazz? Heavy metal? All those songs have solos. These days it seems like the concept of the "solo" is fading. Back in my day you'd never hear a song without a solo.
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blaa, you're cute. Just kidding.
BaseballD00d, About the lead synth and the fading in, It was something New I haven't done. So I experimented. In no way is this beat done, or even mixed properly.
About there being a heavy guitar - I don't like guitars in my beats. Well, not until I find something decent and am able to tweak it to sound great. The sound you hear isn't a guitar. It's a synth I tweaked a excrement ton out of. As I do with all my sounds.
I don't feel it needs a solo, although I did have it in mind, I may rework the 2nd verse and add a solo.
But thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. Here's something more "clean" I suppose.
http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/163901
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Neptune: nice riff but too repetitive. I was waiting for the changeup that never happened. However, good job, you're a pretty good musician compared to some of the others out there (justin bieber)
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Neptune: nice riff but too repetitive. I was waiting for the changeup that never happened. However, good job, you're a pretty good musician compared to some of the others out there (justin bieber)
haha, thanks. I do realize I still need to perfect what I do. I listen to beats that come on the radio and it saddens me, because most of it sounds the same. But appreciate the feedback, once again.
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Salute: nice song with a good intro.
Solitude: also really good
This Is Not A Dream: good beat but that synth kinda screams in your ears. Too high pitched I guess.
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where is the bass?
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where is the bass?
I didn't add it yet. Like I stated, it's not complete yet. I've added bassdrums, but I don't like them. I want a deep bass though, that hits hard.
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Salute: nice song with a good intro.
Solitude: also really good
This Is Not A Dream: good beat but that synth kinda screams in your ears. Too high pitched I guess.
Thanks! I don't really like the Highpitch sound anymore in that "This is not a dream" either. Could always go back and fix it.
http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/163899
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Upright bass has a deep thumping sound and hits hard. I think that's the way to go.
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Thanks! I don't really like the Highpitch sound anymore in that "This is not a dream" either. Could always go back and fix it.
http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/163899
We all pretend is actually painful to listen to. I don't like vocal distortion that much. I see what you're trying to do but I like the old capo better:D
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its ok man, i preferred that other one you showed me. this ones OK.
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This is what I mean, about the heavy guitar, percussion, etc. Although this song does lack a solo and grand piano.
Rapper: my brother SlickNinja/FishyNinja/Mysteryman20
Interjector: me
Meower: my cat
BG info: my brother playing minecraft while freestyle rapping
Song: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0ByutPv2Z36izQm02OVQ3V2VHVzQ/edit?usp=docslist_api (anyone can listen)
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Just listened to your new hip hop tune. Probably your best yet. The synthesizers flow well with one another.
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Just listened to your new hip hop tune. Probably your best yet. The synthesizers flow well with one another.
Thanks! Yeah, I was just messing around with brass and came up with everything from than and there. Did it pretty quick too. :D
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Song: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0ByutPv2Z36izQm02OVQ3V2VHVzQ/edit?usp=docslist_api (anyone can listen)
omfg this was the worst thing i've ever heard, litterally almost killed myself listening to this. Please never do this again.
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This is what I mean, about the heavy guitar, percussion, etc. Although this song does lack a solo and grand piano.
Rapper: my brother SlickNinja/FishyNinja/Mysteryman20
Interjector: me
Meower: my cat
BG info: my brother playing minecraft while freestyle rapping
Song: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0ByutPv2Z36izQm02OVQ3V2VHVzQ/edit?usp=docslist_api (anyone can listen)
dude...wtf ? LOL
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omfg this was the worst thing i've ever heard, litterally almost killed myself listening to this. Please never do this again.
Very unhelpful indeed. What specifically do you dislike about the song? Heavy guitar? Non-humans on the mic? My terrible voice? Specific feedback is more helpful than generalizations like "I almost killed myself"
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Very unhelpful indeed. What specifically do you dislike about the song? Heavy guitar? Non-humans on the mic? My terrible voice? Specific feedback is more helpful than generalizations like "I almost killed myself"
When someone almost kills themselves due to something you produced, it implies it is so bad there is no means of fixing it therefore you should just give up. It's not a generalization, it literally put my life in danger.
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When someone almost kills themselves due to something you produced, it implies it is so bad there is no means of fixing it therefore you should just give up. It's not a generalization, it literally put my life in danger.
Still doesn't help. What part of "specific" do you not understand?
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Still doesn't help. What part of "specific" do you not understand?
what part of 'all of it was excrement' do you not understand.
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all of it was excrement
worst thing I've ever heard
OK, it's clear that you two are not huge fans of my music. Tell me, I'm interested to know, to what genres of music do you listen? This way, I can get a better sense for what type of fanbase does not enjoy listening to my music.
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I enjoy music that is not excrement
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I enjoy music that is not excrement
This guy's opinion means nothing to me seeing that he clearly has no idea about what he's talking when it comes to music.
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This is what I mean, about the heavy guitar, percussion, etc. Although this song does lack a solo and grand piano.
Rapper: my brother SlickNinja/FishyNinja/Mysteryman20
Interjector: me
Meower: my cat
BG info: my brother playing minecraft while freestyle rapping
Song: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0ByutPv2Z36izQm02OVQ3V2VHVzQ/edit?usp=docslist_api (anyone can listen)
from start to finish:
1. OOOOOH, NICE RETRO TUNES.
2. BOOOM
3. is the chick nice who's talking?
4. love the cat
side note - 2 to 3 times better than capos puke
5. this is getting repetitive
conclusion: better than jitspoes jingles and capos puke
edit : would still change the radio station if that excrement was on. Would rather listen to my studded tires
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from start to finish:
1. OOOOOH, NICE RETRO TUNES.
2. BOOOM
3. is the chick nice who's talking?
4. love the cat
side note - 2 to 3 times better than capos puke
5. this is getting repetitive
conclusion: better than jitspoes jingles and capos puke
edit : would still change the radio station if that excrement was on. Would rather listen to my studded tires
3. My brother is not yet in his teens, so that's why he might sound like a chick. the only female involved in this song is my cat.
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blaa, you're the true definition of an idiot.
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http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/165164
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http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/165164
1. Why do you use the same drop vocal for most of your songs? I'd like to hear a new one.
2. Very good overall.
3. Try experimenting with some other instruments, too, like bass, guitar, sax, turntable/scratch, violin, etc. Obviously you can't use every single instrument in existence, but you can expand your variety.
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baseballdude stop giving feedback his excrements 100x better then yours, yours made me almost slit my wrists, and as the blood was pouring out of my veins dying, I would drink bleach to destroy my insides and rip out my eyes, followed by shooting myself in the head - ear to ear - to get out of listening to your garbage. Stop making excrement before other people almost die.
User banned for this post.
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baseballdude stop giving feedback his excrements 100x better then yours, yours made me almost slit my wrists, and as the blood was pouring out of my veins dying, I would drink bleach to destroy my insides and rip out my eyes, followed by shooting myself in the head - ear to ear - to get out of listening to your garbage. Stop making excrement before other people almost die.
Pushing the pause button is a more effective solution.
Stop giving feedback to someone who is better than me? If that statement were actually true, then people should never talk about great music because those musicians are better musicians than the vast majority. Point invalidated.
Linkin parks for cigarettes? I don't think there's any way to rephrase that sentence to make it make less sense. But assuming you don't like linkin, what kind of music do you like? I've asked you this before and you're concealing your true musical tastes, if you have any, by making yet another very unhelpful generalization that you enjoy music that isn't excrement. That statement could come out of anyone's mouth and be true. Nobody likes music that they dislike. From now on, I command you to only give me criticism if it's constructive. You have been giving me a lot of criticism that I can't use because of how useless the given information is.
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I like cher lloyd and selena gomez music, sometimes i jam out to miley cyrus if im in the mood
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I like cher lloyd and selena gomez music, sometimes i jam out to miley cyrus if im in the mood
OK, it's very obvious that we have different tastes in music. I'm not a fan at all of any of your fav's but I respect their music. It's not like they're writing music with the sole purpose of getting famous. Instead, they're composing to express themselves, for the most part.
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1. Why do you use the same drop vocal for most of your songs? I'd like to hear a new one.
2. Very good overall.
3. Try experimenting with some other instruments, too, like bass, guitar, sax, turntable/scratch, violin, etc. Obviously you can't use every single instrument in existence, but you can expand your variety.
Same drop vocal, how? I have TWO songs, with a low drop vocal. Why? Because it fits the beat. It's a southern/Trap style beat. Would you rather me use a more ''House like'' vocal? It wouldn't blend. Maybe if I made house music, or dubstep, the vocal drop would be different. Or if my beat had a different sound, it would be different.
You recently said you heard my "new tune" and liked it, this is the same beat...
I do appreciate your feedback because it opens my eyes.
I don't plan to steer to just one type genres. I'm currently working on a house track atm. With a different approach clearly.
My strong suite is anything with Horns, brass, high pitched synths, etc. It's what I currently feel comfortable making.
I've made various beats throughout my time. From nothing but Piano, organs, and violins. My sound library isn't as big as it use to be. Since I've had to reformat millions of times. And if it were that easy, I'd be the best at errrthang.
Oh. and blaa is still a female dog.
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I like cher lloyd and selena gomez music, sometimes i jam out to miley cyrus if im in the mood
come and get it come and get it, na na na na, na na na na.
philosophical as intercourse
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http://www.dopetracks.com/beat/165412
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Luv the piano
Lead synth sounds ugly again. I guess I'm not a big fan of synthesizers "sliding" in pitch from one note to the next.
Drumming is slightly better
Abrupt ending; try to give your songs a more distinct, recognizable ending.