Hello Marth, i am glad you came to the world of mapping. This map does have the bits and pieces of a map, but, no offense, looks really unpleasing to the eyes. You also made a few mistakes with the spawning and i always though of the goals as a net. Here's my suggestion: don't release this map. It has many flaws and although its not bad for a first map, i really would not want to play it. Sorry if i am being to harsh, but i think you should make multiple maps before releasing any. Go to the mapping section and start reading ALL of the stickies, it will improve your mapping skill. Practice, Practice, Practice!!!!!!!!!!! The first map i ever released was like my 20th map, and its still a pretty sad sight. Before i release any more i will have many more maps. My folder when loading up BSP is giant from unfinished maps that i just turned into practice maps. Hope this helps, and don't get discouraged, almost no 1st maps are full releasing quality. If you really want to stick with this map, i suggest releasing it on the mapping forum, getting a sick beating, and seeing how much you can improve it from the comments. Sincerely
-Cusoman