Newmap: Butane

[BlackGuard]

Here is a new map

[Garrett]

That map doesn't look to lit with a sun.  Please use a sun for lighting and repost new screen shots.

[Chef-Killer]

Is this your first map, BlackGuard?

For a first beta, it looks ok. It is a bit empty, but i think you will add things with the next betas. And you should add a few colours.

Good luck for a nice beta 2.

[godzilla]

it looks ok, but you need barrels, walls, boxes etc. in most mops you shouldnt have a large empty area, unless you cant help it.

[iced]

i think its a good start but like what was stated above it is a bit empty

[Termin8oR]

Looks pretty good.

[Zorchenhimer]

You need to clutter the crap out of that map.  Also, one thing I saw that was out of place:



It was connected to the wall on the other side.

[godzilla]

You need to clutter the crap out of that map.  Also, one thing I saw that was out of place:



It was connected to the wall on the other side.

good eyes

[UDead]

This is just what i think and I think you used too many textures the wrong way, by which of what i mean as, see the pictures above me the floor you have stone and then go striate into sand, why not just continue the stone up the slop? and the the diffrent type of brick is fine as long as is fits in right, if you know what i mean.

[RoBiNandL!nk]

it makes it more interesting but if you use wayyyyy to many that makes no sense and a slanted stone ramp dude? comeon

[jitspoe]

I've uploaded the map to the beta server.  See PM for details.  As others have said, it looks very empty.  Kind of like a shell of a map that has just been started.  The lighting is also very bland.  You should look into sun lighting as Garrett suggested.  The ramp at the base is annoying - you should slant it so it can be walked up.  The planks for the bridges look weird.  Planks should be nailed to something, not suspended by the ends.  I think making slats out of solid wood grain textures and resting them on top of the metal strips would look better.

[UDead]

all I am saying is I think it looks out of place, but thats just my opinion and that is all it will ever be.