I could find a few more things...
But first a question. What happened to your other maps? There were a few very nice ones, but all of your maps are still unfinished. You should really try to improve and finish your maps
Btw. other mappers should do this, too. Most of the new maps never get finished. That's sad. For all people who spend time in mapping, feedback, play testing, etc. I'm also sure mappers would improve their maps a lot more, if we would have an official maplist. At the moment there are no need and no reason for them to fix bugs, etc. when beta maps could get matched without problems
This map is very nice. I like it. Great job. There're two general things I noticed though.
1. I'm right that there is no way to leave mid low? If so I would like to see one possibility here, maybe a ladder or a small box/barrel.
2. The flag is a little bit hard to grab. Maybe it would be a little bit more easy to grab the flag if it would be placed in the mid of the room. The room itself is already a good choice in my opinion.
You need to change two other things for the entities.
1. For the barrels use "brass" instead of "bronze". Just replace the values.
2. Add "angle" "#" to all info_player_deathmatch entities.
Here're a few screenshots with stuff you need to change for both bases:
Red: Wrong texture. You did this for all barrels where you can see the bottom.
Green: You need to add clip brushes here, that players can't get stuck on the sides or below the ladder. This need to be changed for all ladders.
Red: I´d like to see clip brushes here, too.
Red: Misaligned.
Red: I'd rotate the texture 90° to fix this.
Green: Misaligned.
Red: Move this face a little bit. You need to align a few faces of all these things.
Green: One more ladder. Same like screenshot 1.
Red: I hope you understand the screenshot, because it's a little bit hard to explain. All of this things have a not long enough horizontal brush under the window. Make the left brush a little bit higher and the horizontal brush a little bit longer.
Red: Move this texture a little bit like you did with the other barrels.
Green: Misaligned.
Like the first screenshot.
Red: Wrong texture.
Green: Add clip brushes here.
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