crooked_1

[Worldstar(nick123)]

Edited map

Give me some tips thanks
I got map file when he posted it on here saying he want some one to work on so i did

[Worldstar(nick123)]

error 1

Screenshots

[ic3y]

F12, looks like Pp1

[MrPeach]

You shouldn't add 2nd flag.

[Worldstar(nick123)]

You shouldn't add 2nd flag.

why not?

[Chef-Killer]

I'd rename the file to crooked_b2, because there's already a crooked_b1.

Did you run a final compile without error and warnings? Just from the screenshots it doesn't look like you did it.

I'll have a look at the map later.

[Worldstar(nick123)]

no i need to work on lighting still

[Chef-Killer]

You should do it before releasing any map file, even if it's just a beta version

[Worldstar(nick123)]

how can i make the lights brighter?

[aircrew]

I don´t like what you´ve with map a bit. Please stop and start your own map.

[Worldstar(nick123)]

I don´t like what you´ve with map a bit. Please stop and start your own map.

will do thanks

[Chef-Killer]

how can i make the lights brighter?

Sun lighting or texture lighting?

[Chef-Killer]

No offensive, but this map is a step backwards instead of an improvement.

The problems, misalignments, etc. aren't fixed.

The map leaks now.

The map isn't final compiled to get full vis and lighting.

The map is unplayable now.

As I already pm'd you, you should learn bsp step by step. Start with an easy map and try to understand how bsp works. The sticky topics on this board will help you.
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=5150.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=714.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=960.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=3031.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=5149.0