I've uploaded the map to the beta server.
I'm not getting much of a jungle vibe from this. When I think of jungle, I think of deep, lush, green environments. The ground is very bright and washed out/bleached looking in this. I think the rock texture is a good choice, but you need textures that fit with it better and don't have such a harsh contrast.
Something seems weird with the lighting. In the middle of the map, it's a bright white -- maybe even a bit bluish, but near the bases, the lighting is yellower. Also, some of the wood boards look like they're glowing. Do you have them set to emit light? I also think there's too much contrast between the light and dark areas. It's difficult to see from light to dark. The lit areas are super bright and the shadows are super dark.
It's an improvement over your previous maps, but navigation still feels a bit awkward. For example, right before the bridge in the center, you have to jump up. This is too tall to jump up directly from the flat platform before it. You have to hit the step/ramp thing before it or have enough speed going up the wood ramp at the beginning. If you jump on the step, you basically have to come to a complete stop because you can't hit the step and jump up high enough to get onto the bridge ledge. There's really no need for that. It could just be a ramp or you could just make the bridge lower.
The jump to the 2nd flag is also awkward. You're coming in from the center and have to hit a rock on the left. You also have the rock bunker thing that aids in the jump. They're both further left than the flag, so the natural flow is to hit the wall to the left of the flag. If you hit too far to the left, you end up missing the platform before the flag completely. If you end up just making it to the platform, you have to jump over to the side to the box to get in. It just feels really awkward and does not flow well.
My suggestions would be:
- Move the rock over to be more in line with the flag.
- Move/widen the rock bunker thing to be more in line with the flag.
- Move the box in front of the flag opening or do something to make it less out of the way/awkward.
