New map Churches

[SystemCZ]

It´s me second map 

[SystemCZ]

A and here is download http://www.dolphsguild.xf.cz/churches.bsp

[KiLo]

1^st Resize your screenshots next time or now.

2^nd This map looks like grave with different textures.

3^rd Looks like poor texture choices.

4^th Attach the file to your post.

5^th Rename the map to churches_b1.

[KiLo]

w00t for my double post!

So I went through the map real quick and made a small demo for you.

In my opinion this is a poor attempt at a map. You just took grave and fudged it up and made it ctf. If you were to redo this like grave with a nice mid I may reconsider my opinion.

The one good thing about this map is that it has nice low r_speeds as you can see in the demo.

Note: I'm sorry if my demo isn't up to the quality of jitspoe's.

[SystemCZ]

Look good and u see secred wall and carridors

[KiLo]

Um no. It looks like crap. Also I didn't see any secret walls or corridors.

Also there is a huge advantage for the blue team (I think) you a spawn an autococker and an automag in the one base while all you have in the other are traccers, stingrays, and a VM-68.

[sk89q]

Err, from the screenshots: did you light the map?

[SystemCZ]

U must shot on wall near flag and up flag is clear wall.

[y00tz]

I recommend putting more detail into the architecture, try and make it as feasible as possible for example, why is the roof made of stones, and even worse - what keeps it from caving in?

Also - most of your textures are unaligned and need rotated.

Also you're lighting doesn't feel correct, here is my take from a few months ago on how a church map should be lit.  (Also note the architecture, texture choices, etc.)

[DrRickDaglessMD]

haha ok a few points:

- This map is completely unreleasable, its almost as bad as the real Grave (OLE!).
- It appears to be unlit.
- The textures are all wrong. The selection is boring and often just plain wrong for the task.
- The architecture is deranged, why on earth are their massive holes in the roof? it doesn't even look like a church!
- A huge number of misaligned brushes. eg, the logo's on the outside of the churches float.
- For some reason the top of the back walls are mist brushes.
- the scaling of your pews and stuff is all wrong.
- guns on each side are unbalanced.
- you have an invalid field on the spawns for autocockers.
- you didn't ask if you could remake Grave.

and y00tz, your church makes my eyes fall out. I <3 U.

- Dagless

[KiLo]

and y00tz, your church makes my eyes fall out. I <3 U.

Only good thing I heard in that entire rant

And y00tz what map is that because I am pretty sure I have played it?

[MiZ]

I don't have any tips just comments.Look at your map!It's like another grave, like dagless said did you even ask if you could make another grave?Well a better name for it (if you get permission to make a second one) is grave2 instead of churches.

[SystemCZ]

On u pictuers is nice map

[SystemCZ]

But i dont know so this map exist

[Termin8oR]

Wow y00tz, those new CTP1 Textures would be a great help.

[lekky]

Stop hijacking his thread! And y00tz, its all very well posting such sexy pictures, but if no maps can be made from them for whatever reason, its pointless.

[Apocalypse]

Only good thing I heard in that entire rant

And y00tz what map is that because I am pretty sure I have played it?

Pretty sure he was just showing off a map he made of CTP textures KiLo.

[y00tz]

1.  I didn't post the map to show off CTP textures, I was showing the OP what I was expecting from a church themed map.
2.  That map has current CTP1 textures
3.  This thread has nothing to do with that map (y_crypts, unreleased)