New Map: Death Valley (Preview)

[atmays]

Well this is my first map I have did since I was in DeW.

This map is nowhere near completion, It has leaks, no lighting, and its very open. I only qbsp it for now.

There is also areas where you can get stuck if you jump into them. Its more things that can be fixed but pretty sure you would see that when you check it out.

My Bunkers look bad and I have alot more ideas I want to put into this map.

I want to line the caves with stalactites and stalagmites and have debris from the roof and such to give it that real cave setting.

I really posted this to show what I'm working on. I'm also looking for a person that can fabricate bunkers and other objects for me. Also I'm taking advice on the positions of the jumps I want to put on here. I want this to be a 2 flag map (I do have an idea on where I'm gonna put the flags). With possibly a white flag in the low area.

I want to add well placed jumps that helps you gain speed. I like the set up of my terrain so I prob wont change much on that. I am looking for incite though.

P.S.
THIS IS NOT MY FIRST BETA. JUST AN PREVIEW.

[Kaos]

sshots.

[ic3y]

deathvalley_b1 on all Arctic

[Pepperoni]

looks kind of fun. i hope the beta versions textures will make it clearer

[Garrett]

Although it looks very fun, the map is self 'looks' boring.  There is two much of the same texture everywhere.  Add some visual details or something to break up the textures a bit.

[atmays]

Although it looks very fun, the map is self 'looks' boring.  There is two much of the same texture everywhere.  Add some visual details or something to break up the textures a bit.

O Of course

This is just an preview. I am looking for people to help me craft bunkers and get some ideas for visuals. Im getting better making terrains I just suck with visuals. So if you a great crafter hit me up.

[RiMiNi]

almost all crates are misaligned.. make one eprfect one. lock the textures and move it around. you can get stuck between walls and some crates.. ugly/boring look. the wooden platform/bunker thing has different thicknesses or different parts

[y00tz]

Is that the CTP1 grass or part of my 'grass pack' that's getting passed around?

[LoVeRs]

there you go boy.

[Byz]

Light the map.
There are some misaligned boxes.
r speeds were over 4300.
The map is too empty.