New Map: Out In The Open

[ShyGuy]

Hello everybody,

  I have been working the past week on a map. I have gotten tons of help from awesome people on IRC as well as the tons of posts on the forums.


<-- !! oito_b1.bsp !! -->

- 2 teams
- mode: CTF

  Known Bugs!
- there are a few known textures that are not completely aligned ( i wanted a b1 release )
- the lights underground can be hit if jumped into the tunnels just right

Here are a few ScreneShots -><-








please comment my map, but don't flame...

Yes this is my first released map EVER!!!


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Here is a photobucket with the SS's on it... this is for you Lappy

http://s211.photobucket.com/albums/bb50/shyguy38393/

i played it. when i went obs i went under the map and it was leaks

Can you give me a SS or a demo? i do not get this error not matter how many times i obs?


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New version: sorry for the upload mistake

<-- !! oito_b2.bsp !! -->

In this version I seem to have got the lighting down but i also have more texture lifts...  i am working on this now...

[FluKe]

nice map




-coolguy

[Lapppy]

I cant see the Sshots, could you upload them to a different site?

[FluKe]

i played it. when i went obs i went under the map and it was leaks

[T3RR0R15T]

There is only the beta1 for download. Can u pls upload the new version?

[jitspoe]

You need to make sure your map is vised and lit before releasing even a beta version.

A few thoughts:
- Those are some huge barrels.
- Lollipop trees are ugly.  The map would look better without trees than with those.  (And why does everybody use the wood grain texture instead of bark)
- Why does the red base have a blue wall, and the blue base a red wall?
- Grass doesn't usually grow well on walls or underground.
- Lots of misaligned textures.  Are you using an appropriate grid size?  Try to stick with 32 or 16, depending on the texture.

I think it would be less work to scrap the map and start over than try to fix all the alignment and leak issues.  The grid is your friend.

[Garrett]

If you want to use trees in your map, try using sk89q's tree models.

http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=14241.msg139874#msg139874