Lighting needs to be done correctly, the sun is in one area, and the shadows are on the wrong side. Random areas in tunnels are brighter than areas outside...
You pretty much spawn with 2500+ r_speeds
It just feels like more of the same... RiMiNi, think about it this way, what game changing element, what draw, what reason is there for me to play your map instead of the 10 others it feels like? I mean, if I wanted to see blocky ladders and bridges, lollipop trees, and lots of grass, I have a large of array to choose from. Perhaps you should focus on what makes this map unique and what it does better than everything else, and run with it, make it truly yours and something that DP would be proud of.
-y
edit: I just realized I forgot to say something positive about the map, anyway here it is.
The map feels like it was inspired, which is always something good to see in a map. What was your inspiration for it anyway?