Help with my map.

[TurtlesRock]

Yeah when you finish fixing that leak you should probably put up new screen shots so people can help you better But from what I see it looks like a great map to play on. I look forward to seeing it when it's finished.

[RoBiNandL!nk]

these two people the same or what?? idk how to check ips or anything but anyways same map as the other one i just posted on small square and no fillers.... kinda like oddjob

[TurtlesRock]

Are you asking if PwNoObs and oddjob are the same person?

[PwNno0bS]

lol huh?

[S8NSSON]

Keep learning...get more complex...don't expect any of your maps to be worth public view for at lease two to four more maps.
Get a few private people to assist in critique and help.

...But from what I see it looks like a great map to play on. I look forward to seeing it when it's finished.

Are you on heroin? Give me a break the map is a square.
Telling someone that their early terrible maps look "great" does absolutely nothing but hurt the mappers development.
Early mappers need to know they are sub-par and have much more to learn or you'll end up with another Cyko making 42 boring terrible maps a day.

The maps blows...keep learning and you'll get there.

[PwNno0bS]

Keep learning...get more complex...don't expect any of your maps to be worth public view for at lease two to four more maps.
Get a few private people to assist in critique and help.

Are you on heroin? Give me a break the map is a square.
Telling someone that their early terrible maps look "great" does absolutely nothing but hurt the mappers development.
Early mappers need to know they are sub-par and have much more to learn or you'll end up with another Cyko making 42 boring terrible maps a day.

The maps blows...keep learning and you'll get there.

okay..just about all these maps are square..and it is my first map.. its not even finished.. But when it is i bet you'll be the first to play it and like it so you can take your negativity and shove it.

[_burnt]

Dude, what do you mean by "just about all these maps are square"? If you mean maps like shock or oddjob, they're meddling container boxes! Look at maps like carpathian, it's not a "box", it has many shapes and routes. Go look at carpathian with NoClip observer and you see what i'm talking about. It's not a "box".
If you look at my first finished map, it was pretty much a "box". But my second finished map is nowhere near to a "box".

You should also look at these, especially the first one. You think there's too much to read and it's not worth it, but it is worth to read them. Read them few times properly and with care and attention. After that you notice, that you understand a lot more from mapping than before.

http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=15898.0

http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=5150.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=714.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=11297.0
http://dplogin.com/forums/index.php?topic=3031.0

And lastly, if someone gives you negative feedback, don't get discouraged of it. Converselybe happy that someone gives attention to your creation. In mapping, you must take all the feedback you've been granted. After all, if you don't get feedback, and no one critiques your map, how do you improve?

[PwNno0bS]

thnx you