As the others said, the map looks very good. It's not your first one, you should really try to finish your maps
It's also nice to see that you aligned lots of stuff. I could find a few misaligned brushes, though.
All spawns for the players have "angle" "270". You need the change the angles for the red team to "angle" "90".
I would change the "_sun_angle", too. There are a little bit too much shadows in my opinion. Make the sun standing higher. Reduce the second value for this.
sshot: You maybe should add a ladder somewhere in the near of the red marked place. The jump could be a little bit to hard for new players.
+1, definitely to hard for newer players. The shortest way must be possible for all players.
I made lots of screenshots with things you need to fix or align. Too much to post all of them here. Download the file lit_b1.rar. I'm sorry for this
But you don't need to scare about the count, most of the fixes and alignments will be done very fast
Note that a few things need to be changed for both sides! I colored everything. If you have any question, post the screenshot and I will explain it a bit more detailed.
Download lit_b1.rar (screenshots) here!All in all I would say: If you can and will change all things the other people and I mentioned and if you will finish this map someday...
, the game needs more maps like this.