Well done
Can you upload the sound potok.wav please?
The func_timer has "randon" "5" and "random" "5". Delete the wrong setting "randon" "5" to fix the warning while loading the map.
I'd add a few more player spawns. Maybe change from 4 to 8 for each team. And please add "angle" "#" to them. At the moment some players look in front of a wall after spawning.
As you and abnormal said, there're many jumps. In my opinion a few too many
Screenshots with stuff for one and both bases:
I'd like to see a clip brush here, too.
Misaligned texture.
Some faces of this barrel needs to be moved 1 unit. The red barrel looks ok.
Did you forgot a brush here?
Two things I don't like here. The whole mid area is extremely open. And the transparent stuff is looking horrible in my opinion. I'd like to see a nice texture for them.
All red barrels are misaligned. The blue ones are ok
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that is right i remake all maps , which i made and i will complete all ... but some maps cant export to final in HQ idk why .
You don't need to use the HQ export. Post here, if there're problems with the normal final compile, too. I really hope that you will finish some of your nice maps sometime. I'd prefer seeing an other finished map than this one