Looking good. Nice to see that you used a few clip brushes.
Delete "teeam1" "blue" from the worldspawn to fix the warning while loading the map. You can replace it with "maxteams" "2".
Add "angle" "#" to your player spawns. It's annoying when you look in front of a wall after spawning.
And now a few screenshots with stuff you need to fix for one or both bases. You can ignore the graphic issues, it's a problem with my pball.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1371.jpg)
Red: For new players it's hard to get high here. There're a few other rough egdes all over the map. Maybe these edges destroy the gameplay and the gameflow a little bit.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1373.jpg)
Red: Here're two blue faces. The red base looks ok.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1375.jpg)
Red: I guess it's hard to see. You need to rotate the lamp texutes for some of this lights (180°). The green one looks ok (left), the red doesn't look ok (right).
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1377.jpg)
Red: There're lots of misalignments with this wood texture. Have a look at it. I can't make screenshots of all misalignments.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1379.jpg)
Red: An other example.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1381.jpg)
Red: An other example.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1383.jpg)
Red: Move this texture. Lots of blue barrels are misaligned. I tried to make screenshots with all of them. The red barrels are looking good. Couldn't find a one misaligned red barrel.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1385.jpg)
Red: A few more misaligned barrels.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1387.jpg)
Red: An other misaligned barrel.
Blue: Wrong texture.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1389.jpg)
Red: I would add a clip brush here, too.
Blue: Wrong texture.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1391.jpg)
Red: A few more misaligned barrels.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1393.jpg)
Red: There's a little cave behind this little hole. Fix the hole and the cave will be fixed, too.
Blue: I would add a clip brush here, too.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1395.jpg)
Red: Misalignment. Make the texture surface a little bit smaller that there're three rings.
Yellow: Rotate this texture. I guess it's done on the other base.
![](http://www.otb-server.de/wbblite/attachments/1397.jpg)
Red base and blue base: Different texture
![Cheesy :D](Smileys/dp2/cheesy.gif)
All in all this could be an interesting map. If you can fix all the stuff I mentioned, I'll say that this map was a great job from you.