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grimsi

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New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« on: April 21, 2011, 01:57:22 AM »
Mapname:   Battle at Cinema
Description: This is a map at the Cinema prepared for Paintball
Gamemodes:      - CTF Capture The Flag
                        - Deathmeatch  
Teams:  2
Mapfiles:   cinema.bsp
Screenshots:  I will take some Scrennshots!

Please say me, what is good and what is bad at this Map.
I would be happy about Critique.
Thx for testing!!
[-TBGC-]GRIMSI

jitspoe

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2011, 08:09:24 AM »
I can't look at it right now, but you should put a beta extension in your filename, like cinema_b1.bsp or cinema_beta1.bsp.

Lucky7

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2011, 01:43:39 PM »
There are missaligned light brushes, the light is too strong in the hall, i don't know why you need the room with the ticket stands, but if you add a neutral flag it could be used in CTF mode and there are some bad field errors. All in all, i like the idea, but i don't like the map :(

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2011, 02:56:52 PM »
The map itself is a kinda cool concept, since it's unique. But you've oversized just about everything, and it's got no flow to it at all. The room with the ticket stands is useless and huge. I don't see a map like this turning into a map that will ever get used unless you turn it into a siege map. But basically just work on the actual mapping aspect of your map and the flow of it. Unique idea though.

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2011, 04:58:41 AM »
Nice to see that there're new maps with different gamemodes :) I prefer DM for this map. Add "gamemode" "4" to the flags and bases, that these entities doesn't work in DM, too.

There are missaligned light brushes, the light is too strong in the hall, i don't know why you need the room with the ticket stands [...] and there are some bad field errors.
These are exactly my first thoughts :D For the lighting I'd use a lower value at the surface settings.

Delete the "targetnumber" "3" at the func_door and replace "givehooper" "200" with "givehopper" "200" to fix the bad field messages while loading the map.

I'd also like to see "angle" "#" at the player spawns.

Online @ [OTB] Beta! I renamed the map to cinema_b1.bsp. Tell me if you need the login for our beta server.

PS: Wenn du möchtest kann du die Map auch gerne bei uns im [OTB] Forum eintragen, dort bekommst du dann auch deutsches Feedback ;)

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2011, 01:44:04 AM »
ok, i will change the filename

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2011, 01:46:40 AM »
danke chefkiller, dass du sie bei dir ins forum hast.

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2011, 01:59:07 AM »
Is it your first map? When it is such a goood one :) I like the idea.

- You must prepare the light brushes (all light brushes)
- The light in the hall is too hard i think ( the same as @Lucky7)
- Jetzt in deutsch kanns net in english :D = An den türen ist noch ein bischen von der blauen tür in der wand also der blaue brush berührt noch die wand :)

MFG Burniieee :D

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2011, 06:34:36 AM »
Screenshots for people who don't want to download the map?

Aveiro

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2011, 11:49:56 AM »
Screenshots for people who don't want to download the map?


+1

grimsi

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"Battle at Cinema" Beta Version 2.0
« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2011, 10:41:19 AM »
OK, here is the new Beta!
Changes: -NO Ticket hall, but 4 Cinemas
              -the light brushes are better
« Last Edit: April 24, 2011, 11:57:27 PM by grimsi »

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #11 on: April 24, 2011, 10:42:32 AM »
The Screenshots will take a little bit time, but im going to take some.
Oh, and youre right, its my first map.

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #12 on: April 24, 2011, 10:46:46 AM »
wo ist die stelle mit den brushes?
am eingang oder am gang zur fahne?

grimsi

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"Battle at Cinema" Screenshots
« Reply #13 on: April 24, 2011, 11:22:16 AM »
Here are the Screenshots

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #14 on: April 24, 2011, 11:25:24 AM »
Screenshot 2:

grimsi

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"Battle at Cinema" Screenshots
« Reply #15 on: April 24, 2011, 11:26:49 AM »
Screenshot 3:

grimsi

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"Battle at Cinema" Screenshots
« Reply #16 on: April 24, 2011, 11:27:25 AM »
Screenshot 4:

RoBbIe

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #17 on: April 24, 2011, 12:11:06 PM »
Delete everything besides the base and start over :)

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #18 on: April 24, 2011, 03:11:38 PM »
you know you can post multiple pictures in a single post, right?

grimsi

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Re: New Beta Map "Battle at Cinema"
« Reply #19 on: April 24, 2011, 11:40:26 PM »
i know, but it didn't work yesterday. there was an error: "Sorry! There is already an attachment with the same filename as the one you tried to upload. Please rename the file and try again. ", but there was no files with the same name.