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Title: A poem i wrote..
Post by: PwNno0bS on April 20, 2009, 05:11:58 PM

Well i write alittle and i just want to see what other people think about the poems i write.. Heres one.

As I pick up the phone I got into a trance.
Not knowing what was said I repeat a thought in my head.
Where are you?
Exactly WHERE am I?
I can’t answer that.
I’m stuck between reality and a dream.
Stuck in a place where they both blend.
Where am I?
As I float on a cloud I check the time?
1 hour before im late
But to what?
I can’t remember…
Work, maybe school
No…I got it
A party, for me?
No a friend
I feel myself coming closer to reality
It’s a surprise party...
As I start to drift back into my dream...
Again I hear a voice
 where are you?
As quick as it happened. It’s over
And I find myself back on the phone.
I’m on my way
That’s the only answer I could give...
But I still don’t know
Where am I?



Lol i wrote it while i was in the library.XD

Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: Justinph5 on April 20, 2009, 05:13:38 PM

i got a tear in my eye?

Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: IronFist on April 20, 2009, 07:27:53 PM

So ur with ur honey and yur making out
wen the phone rigns.
U anser it n the vioce is
"wut r u doing wit my daughter?"
U tell ur girl n she say
"my dad is ded".
THEN WHO WAS PHONE?

Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: Eiii on April 20, 2009, 08:44:04 PM

You all need to stop. Right now.

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Post by: P!nk on April 20, 2009, 09:39:02 PM

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Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: Eiii on April 20, 2009, 11:40:07 PM

Oh, I thought it was common knowledge that I'm a well-endowed intersex cow. I mean, that's why I'm in warwulf's IRC channel all the time.
Also, the source of my ego and post count is a closely-guarded company secret. Don't go telling anyone, now.

Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: Fuzz Ball on April 21, 2009, 02:32:09 AM

I like P!nk's more

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Post by: Dirty_Taco on April 23, 2009, 04:14:49 PM

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Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: Eiii on April 24, 2009, 10:17:17 PM

What did I just say? >:|

Title: Re: A poem i wrote..
Post by: IronFist on April 25, 2009, 02:33:26 PM

Quote from: Dirty_Taco on April 23, 2009, 04:14:49 PM

I wonder what it would taste like
Seared, with a little garlic butter?

(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b361/lapetitesinge/hannibal01_l.jpg)

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Post by: Dirty_Taco on April 26, 2009, 05:16:34 AM

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