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PwNno0bS
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A poem i wrote..
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April 20, 2009, 03:11:58 PM »
Well i write alittle and i just want to see what other people think about the poems i write.. Heres one.
As I pick up the phone I got into a trance.
Not knowing what was said I repeat a thought in my head.
Where are you?
Exactly WHERE am I?
I can’t answer that.
I’m stuck between reality and a dream.
Stuck in a place where they both blend.
Where am I?
As I float on a cloud I check the time?
1 hour before im late
But to what?
I can’t remember…
Work, maybe school
No…I got it
A party, for me?
No a friend
I feel myself coming closer to reality
It’s a surprise party...
As I start to drift back into my dream...
Again I hear a voice
where are you?
As quick as it happened. It’s over
And I find myself back on the phone.
I’m on my way
That’s the only answer I could give...
But I still don’t know
Where am I?
Lol i wrote it while i was in the library.XD
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Justinph5
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Re: A poem i wrote..
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April 20, 2009, 03:13:38 PM »
i got a tear in my eye?
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IronFist
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Posts: 1304
Re: A poem i wrote..
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April 20, 2009, 05:27:53 PM »
So ur with ur honey and yur making out
wen the phone rigns.
U anser it n the vioce is
"wut r u doing wit my daughter?"
U tell ur girl n she say
"my dad is ded".
THEN WHO WAS PHONE?
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Eiii
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Posts: 4595
Re: A poem i wrote..
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April 20, 2009, 06:44:04 PM »
You all need to stop. Right now.
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P!nk
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April 20, 2009, 07:39:02 PM »
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Eiii
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April 20, 2009, 09:40:07 PM »
Oh, I thought it was common knowledge that I'm a well-endowed intersex cow. I mean, that's why I'm in warwulf's IRC channel all the time.
Also, the source of my ego and post count is a closely-guarded company secret. Don't go telling anyone, now.
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Fuzz Ball
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April 21, 2009, 12:32:09 AM »
I like P!nk's more
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Dirty_Taco
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April 23, 2009, 02:14:49 PM »
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Eiii
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April 24, 2009, 08:17:17 PM »
What did I just say? >:|
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IronFist
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April 25, 2009, 12:33:26 PM »
Quote from: Dirty_Taco on April 23, 2009, 02:14:49 PM
I wonder what it would taste like
Seared, with a little garlic butter?
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Dirty_Taco
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April 26, 2009, 03:16:34 AM »
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