Author Topic: newmap race (Read 6055 times)

chris123 · « **on:** April 27, 2009, 07:52:35 PM »

2flags per base
low
houses
jumps
waterfall
alot of jumps

[img width=640 height=480http://i41.tinypic.com/vovghk.jpg]http://[/img]

i need some people to tell some of my bad parts so i can fix

MyeRs · « **Reply #1 on:** April 27, 2009, 07:55:42 PM »

Your ladders are brutal. On your waterfalls the water is going the wrong way. I'll look more later.

chris123 · « **Reply #2 on:** April 27, 2009, 07:59:02 PM »

ok

fast way you can use both i like the

Spartax · « **Reply #3 on:** April 28, 2009, 01:08:34 AM »

pls align texture which is over the cap point ....

(i am sorry for my bad english...... )

Fuzz Ball · « **Reply #4 on:** April 28, 2009, 01:16:10 AM »

Just a thought by the time you get to the top of the ladder won't you have been killed? Maybe make another faster way up them.

triggahappy · « **Reply #5 on:** April 28, 2009, 03:15:53 AM »

Grass on roof needs changing.

chris123 · « **Reply #6 on:** April 28, 2009, 04:51:56 AM »

Quote from: Fuzz Ball on April 28, 2009, 01:16:10 AM

Just a thought by the time you get to the top of the ladder won't you have been killed? Maybe make another faster way up them.

there is the jumps with the bariles sryy

MyeRs · « **Reply #7 on:** April 28, 2009, 05:54:25 AM »

Your ramps should go over the barrel to show they are leaning on it. Your ladder and 'high bunker' are paperthin, which looks really awkward. Your boxes above low has 1 and a half boxes. Your bunker infront of flag needs fixing, aswell as one of the mid bunkers. Waterfall is going the wrong way. Red side low entrance doesn't meet properly with the low roof. Blue side ladder+bunker are not touching the wall.

It might just be me but i don't see the lots of jumps in the map, also i don't like the low flags at all. Why is the blue flag the first thing you see going down red low? Oh, if you haven't noticed the map is a straight line with hardly any filler. I wouldn't release a map till you get a solid idea and work harder on it.

KnacK · « **Reply #8 on:** April 28, 2009, 06:20:56 AM »

Not lit either

Cameron · « **Reply #9 on:** April 28, 2009, 06:30:58 AM »

Quote from: KnacK on April 28, 2009, 06:20:56 AM

Not lit either

Its not anything'd either.

blaa · « **Reply #10 on:** April 28, 2009, 07:08:43 AM »

why bother replying to this thread at all?

why i replied, you might ask?
because i want to insult that idiot.

edit: lol, i cant even think of a way to insult this excrement.

sometimes you have to learn just not to post - see ya in 32

Fuzz Ball · « **Reply #11 on:** April 28, 2009, 07:14:32 AM »

Quote from: blaa on April 28, 2009, 07:08:43 AM

edit: lol, i cant even think of a way to insult this excrement.

Don't reply.

Quote from: MyeRs on April 28, 2009, 05:54:25 AM

Your ladder and 'high bunker' are paperthin, which looks really awkward.

+1

_burnt · « **Reply #12 on:** April 28, 2009, 07:55:46 AM »

I only want to ask you few things: Do you even LOOK what you have created? And why, WHY, you keep making Airtime/Shock like maps? And do you even know how to use surface properties?
Looks like you dont even look up what you have just created...

chris123 · « **Reply #13 on:** April 28, 2009, 05:17:16 PM »

HEY B2 LOOKS BETTER

Cameron · « **Reply #14 on:** April 28, 2009, 05:48:53 PM »

HEY POST SCREENSHOTS

You should ALWAYS do as I said above. I don't exactly have the time to go download a map, and look around.

lilb990 · « **Reply #15 on:** April 28, 2009, 06:05:12 PM »

Quote from: chris123 on April 28, 2009, 05:17:16 PM

HEY B2 LOOKS BETTER

Don't just say it looks better post somethings that you revised and re-did

Edit: Before you post a map check for everything please i just found more things that needed to be aligned. *sighs*

MyeRs · « **Reply #16 on:** April 28, 2009, 06:05:38 PM »

You should of changed EVERYTHING people pointed out before putting out b2. You still have paperthin bunkers, leaks, grass ceilings etc...

Rick · « **Reply #17 on:** April 28, 2009, 09:19:21 PM »

LIKE KAPOW'D.

chris123 · « **Reply #18 on:** April 29, 2009, 05:12:57 AM »

WHAT THIS IS WHEN YOU ARE IN 2ND FLAG PEOPLE CAN JUST THROW A NADE AND KILL bUT WHEN I BUT THE JUMP THERE YOU CAN GO BACK UP

Cameron · « **Reply #19 on:** April 29, 2009, 05:40:33 AM »

Thanks for posting some screenshots. From what I can see in those 2 confined areas, you lack so many skills to mapping. Why don't you spend the time reading a guide instead of throwing this crap at the community. All people will say is it looks horrible becuase, well, it is. Make it look good, something original, align textures, light it. Let it take at least a couple of weeks to make. I don't care if you complain like 'ZOMG ITS TAKEN 12 HOURS TO COMPILE ALREADY, intercourse THIS', fail to let it finish will result in a failure of a map. Period.

Btw, talking on caps makes you look dumb, so type properly, and speak English for your own sake.