Author Topic: rip792011: Newmap by sBi  (Read 4172 times)

sBi

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rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« on: December 22, 2011, 12:09:40 PM »
Other map...

rip792011_b1
If someone wants complete my maps, i can send maps on email of upload it.

Download: http://www.uloz.to/11958480/rip792011-b1-bsp
« Last Edit: December 31, 2011, 07:55:19 AM by Chef-Killer »

Rassy

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Re: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 01:06:41 PM »
Nice..GJ..:)

sBi

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Re: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #2 on: December 22, 2011, 01:22:01 PM »
Thanks Rassy ...

zimtstern

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Re: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 04:25:31 AM »
screenshots ty

sBi

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Re: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #4 on: December 24, 2011, 02:51:15 AM »
Here are these screenshots...

Chef-Killer

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Re: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #5 on: December 31, 2011, 07:53:02 AM »
Looks interesting :)

For me there're too many flags, even if they're low counted. I'd prefer two flags for each team or one flag for each team + one mid flag.

Maybe you could add some more player spawns to make the spawns a little bit more variable.

The other entities looks very good.

Some screenshots...


Red: Wrong bottom texture.


Red: The diameter of all barrels is more than 48 units, so you need to scale up the top and bottom textures. Or just create barrels with a diameter of 48 units.


Red: I don't like the slick surface here. It's pretty strange with the sand texture.


Red: Add clip brushes here.
Green: Misaligned texture.



Red: I'd add a clip brush here, too.


Red: Misaligned textures.


Red: Misaligned texture, too. Move the texture a little bit.
Green: Seems that the texture is a little bit too small. Scale it up a little bit and align it again.


Red: I'd like to see a clip brush here, too.
Green: Misaligned texture.


Red: Add one more clip brush here.
Green: There's a hole :)


Red: There different places like this. I'd try to change the (sun) lighting a little bit to fix it. Looks horrible.


Red: Add clip brushes here.


Red: Add clip brushes here, too.

Map is online @ [OTB] Beta!

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Re: rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #6 on: January 15, 2012, 06:10:32 PM »
Uploaded to the beta server and recorded a demo with suggestions.

Biggest complaints:
- What should be basic paths to flags require trick jumps.  Not good for new players and helping the game grow.
- Ladders are gigantic (10ft/3m wide - wider than most ladders are tall!)
- Barrels don't align with standard texture.

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Re: rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #7 on: January 15, 2012, 08:54:53 PM »
i dislike that all of the walls are just brick.. strains the eyes.

sBi

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Re: rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #8 on: January 17, 2012, 11:34:49 AM »
all remake and add new bd way to flag, jump are easy, second flag deleted, but ...
Leaf .. blabla bla ...
help me someone ?
here is rip792011_b2.map who help ? screen what i can do with this ?

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Re: rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #9 on: January 17, 2012, 01:26:01 PM »
I had it only 3 times, while compiling. Don't think it's a problem.

sBi

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Re: rip792011: Newmap by sBi
« Reply #10 on: January 18, 2012, 12:31:28 PM »
Beta 2

I think, that all problems are remake.
Second flag was delted.
Clip brushes added.
Barels are align and 48 units.
Add new simply bd way.
Ladder for white flag is longer.
Ice is remake. Add new texture.

I think, that all ...
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Beta 2 - http://www.uloz.to/12651210/rip792011-b2-bsp